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black and white film. by ~aeronautics:iconaeronautics:



this morning i read assigned papers
with tired eyes. they talked of passion
and of glory. they talked like they had
a lot to say, and too much time
to do it.
they missed the beauty
in you,
brushing your teeth.  
looking for loose change. drinking tea.
taking out the garbage. laughing.




god is in your moments
and not even a writer
can say
how.
©2008-2009 ~aeronautics
:iconaeronautics:

Author's Comments

black and white words
and i've never heard your voice
but i love it.

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:iconlivingcomforteagle:
oh wow.

i adore this. j'adore.

--
dark pictures, thrones, the stones that pilgrims kiss,
poems that take a thousand years to die;
but ape the immortality of this
red label on a little butterfly.
-vladimir nabokov
:iconlnin9:
fan tastic beautiful it is all about the moments...

--
In my nothing, you were everything, to me.
Trent Reznor
:iconr-mitchell:
this is special.
your grasp of detail is brilliant, the wording and structure is absolutely beautiful.
:iconoalicein:
another masterpiece.
:iconanitarose:
this is absolutely phenomenal!
:clap:

--
my war paint is sharpie ink.
:iconyouinventedme:
they talked like they had
a lot to say, and too much time
to do it.
they missed the beauty
in you



is my favorite bit
but the last stanza is splendid
too

xo!

--
one half of ~ZombiesAteUs
:iconcynicalxpoet:
I wish I could write something like this.

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